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    Question I need your help

    this is my originale "résumé" (in french) which is a part of my graduation report PFE :

    A l’issu de toute formation spécialisée, il est toujours prévu de passer un stage pratique de fin d’études dans le milieu professionnel en guise de permettre aux étudiants, de mettre en pratique leurs connaissances théoriques d’une part, et de se familiariser avec la profession qu’ils ont choisie d’une autre.
    C’est ainsi que j’ai eu l’occasion d’effectuer mon stage au sein de la société « INTICSOLUTIONS » Agadir et ce dans le cadre de mon Master Spécialisé en Ingénierie des Systèmes d'Information au sein de la Faculté des Sciences Semlalia, Université Cady Ayyad, Marrakech, Maroc.
    Mon travail consiste à réaliser une application web pour le compte de l’agence immobilière « Agadir Location » et ce en se basant sur les besoins exprimés et les objectifs tracés par l’agence cliente et la société d’accueil.
    Je me suis basé sur la méthode agile « SCRUM » et j’ai opté à faire appel à l’utilisation des nouvelles technologies du web à savoir RESTFUL, JSF, PRIMEFACES,…
    Le présent rapport est la synthèse d’un ensemble de connaissances et d’informations acquises durant la période de stage.
    Bref, ce stage m’a permis de découvrir un peu plus le monde de travail, la confrontation des méthodes et techniques enseignées avec la pratique en vigueur.



    And this is the translation I did for:

    As part of any specialized course, it is always envisaged to pass a practical training in professional environment as allowing the students, to put their theoretical knowledge into practice on the one hand, and in the other hand to familiarize themselves with the profession which they choose.
    It is as well that I had the opportunity to do my internship in the company «INTICSOLUTIONS Agadir» as part of my specialized master in Information systems engineering within the Faculty of Sciences Semlalia, Cady Ayyad University, Marrakech, Morocco.
    My job was to realize a web application on behalf of the agency «Agadir Location» and this basing on the needs expressed and objectives drawn by the client agency and the host company.
    I based my work on the agile method "SCRUM" and I opted to rely on the use of newest web technologies like RESTFUL, JSF, PRIMEFACES...
    This report is a synthesis of a set of knowledge and information acquired during the probationary period.
    In short, this internship allowed me to learn more about the world of work, the confrontation of methods and techniques taught with practice in force.



    Well I only nedd if it's possible to check whether my translation is correct or not, I appologize if my english is weak, english is my third language.....

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    Default Re: I need your help

    The only people who will be able to tell if your translation is correct or not are people who speak both French and English.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    If you can only check if phrases are correct

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    In your previous thread about this, I asked you if this piece will be submitted to your teacher/tutor to be marked or graded but you didn't answer. Please answer that question here.
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    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    In your previous thread about this, I asked you if this piece will be submitted to your teacher/tutor to be marked or graded but you didn't answer. Please answer that question here.
    It will be a part of my graduation report, sur it will be marked but not only this short abstract but the whole report (+70 pages totally in French)

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    If it is going to be marked, then we cannot help you. It would be unfair. You must submit work that you have done alone. I am closing this thread. After your entire report has been marked, you can come back to us if you need help understanding any of the corrections.
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