Suggestions. Good luck.Hello I am writing an email to a recruiter in order to have a feedback.
Could you kindly check if it is good or if there is something that should be changed? I don't want that my email is a literal translation from the italian.
I hope this email finds you well. (I would not use this introductory statement in an e-mail of this type.)
I amMy name is **** and I had three phone interviews for the ***** role in Milan.
I am contacting you today with regard
sto the status of my application because I have high expectationsI am anxious for the [STRIKE job position and [/STRIKE] for what I believe to be a thegreat opportunity to work in ******.
When I applied for the position in the ****'s website on March 31th I really believed that it was the right job I was looking for. I continue in that belief.
I have dreamed a lot about the
biggreat opportunity to work in a field I really like and with a company like *****.
I have dreamedand about the opportunity to workpossibility of working in the international and heterogeneous environments that ***** could provide. aboutThe possibility of working in a team with people from different countries, aboutthe idea of traveling around the world and having business in the several *****'s branches in the world is also intriguing
I look forward to hearing from you and I send you best regards. "
Thank you so much for your help :)