Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
For one thing, we are losing the pattern of virtue. The traditional values of virtuous deeds and upright words have crumbled. Consequently, society is sinking into chaos and disorder. People can’t live in peace and enjoy their work. There is a strong demand to reform social abuses. Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party. We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people, a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure.
For one thing, we are losing the pattern of virtue. The traditional values of virtuous deeds and upright words have crumbled. Consequently, society is sinking into chaos and disorder. People can’t live in peace and enjoy their work. There is a strong demand to reform social abuses. Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party. We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people, a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure.
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