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    Correctness of a few sentences

    Dear teachers,

    Do these sentences work?


    • I believe you can track them knowing their names and appearance.
    • I thought this info was available to all involved.
    • The company I work for is hiring new talents.
    • The boss asked the attendant to gather the names and ages of all employees so he can decide who will travel.
    • I would like you to reconsider your opinion on this matter.


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    Re: Correctness of a few sentences

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    "New talents" in your third sentence should not be plural. Everything else looks all right.

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    Re: Correctness of a few sentences

    I thought 'new talents' could replace 'talented people'. Could you explain why?

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    Re: Correctness of a few sentences

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    Perhaps you could try thinking of it as a collective noun.

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    Re: Correctness of a few sentences

    Terrific.
    As for the particle 'to' in the second sentence. I wonder if 'for' alone would work there too.

    I thought this info was available for all involved.

    and possibly accompanied:

    I thought this info was available for all involved to follow.

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    Re: Correctness of a few sentences

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    1) You could.

    2) I don't get the "to follow" part, though. It would make more sense if it were "instructions" instead of "information".

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