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    Is "Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party" the correct transformation?

    Lena went to the party. She was very reluctant.

    Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party.

    Is the second sentence the correct transformation of the first sentence?

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    #2

    Re: Is "Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party" the correct transformation?

    It's OK.

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    #3

    Re: Is "Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party" the correct transformation?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    Lena went to the party. She was very reluctant.

    Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party.

    Is the second sentence the correct transformation of the first sentence?

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    I prefer "Despite" her reluctance, Lena went the party.

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    Re: Is "Much to her reluctance, Lena went to the party" the correct transformation?

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    I prefer "Despite" her reluctance, Lena went the party.
    Me too, the other sounds comically awkward.

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