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    Could you check my essay,please?
    Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
    Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.
    Dear Sir/ Madam,
    I am writing to inform about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. I īd like to inquire about course details. My name is Anna Brown, I was birth on 22nd May 1993 in Bristol . Now, I am studying at the university in Pozsony.
    I want to do this course , because I think it is a good opportunity to develop my skills and a good benefit to find a work. I am going to graduate the next year,so it would be very useful to finish this course during the summer.
    I would be very grateful if you could tell me when start the course, how much does it cost and what is the final task. Could you send me a brochure about the courses?
    Thank you for your help to this matter. I am look forward to hearing from you son.
    Yours faithfully,
    Anna Brown
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    Default Re: semi-formal letter

    When will you submit this essay to your teacher?
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    I only practise

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    Perhaps the first thing you should do is go through and check the spelling. In the first sentence, you have used the word "Fertiary". Given the title of the assignment, I think you should be able to copy that word correctly. Use the Edit Post button to correct it. At the same time, you can correct the spacing around the punctuation. We do not put a space before a full stop or a comma.
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    I checked my letter, and there was no spelling mistake. Where do you find it? I intentionally put a space after a full stop or a comma.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sydney5 View Post
    Could you check my essay,please?
    Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
    Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.

    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    My name is Anna Brown, I was birth born on 22nd May 1993 in Bristol. Now At the moment, I am studying at the university in Pozsony.

    I am writing to ​you inform to enquire about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. I'd like to inquire about course details.

    I want would like to do this course (no comma required here) because I think it is would be a good opportunity to develop my skills and a good would be a great benefit to in find my search for a work job. I am going to graduate the next year, so it would be very useful to finish this course the TPC during this summer.

    I would be very grateful if you could tell me when start the course starts, how much does it costs and what is the final task test/exam entails. Could you send me a brochure about the courses course?

    Thank you for your help to in this matter. I am look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours faithfully,

    Anna Brown
    I must apologise for my error in my first post. I meant to say "We do not put a space before a full stop or comma.

    Please see my corrections above in red.
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