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    Default A holiday I remember

    Hi everyone
    I have a essay about "A holiday I remember". I wrote something about that. Can you check for me?
    " Last year, I had an interesting trip to HCM city. This was the first time I go by plane, so I was a little bit of nervous. But when I was on plane, I feel excited. Everything was tiny when I look at from above. It took 2 hours to fly to Tan Son Nhat airport. After landing, I moved to hotel and went to see a friend who helped me exploring the city. We visited many famous places like: Independence palace, Duc Ba church, Sai Gon central post office. They're beautiful architecture, so we took may photos. We also ate street food. Street food was so cheap, fresh and delicious. We hung out at an outdoor where young people sat on ground and had fun together. This was nice trip, and I hope I'll come back the city someday."

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    Default Re: A holiday I remember

    Quote Originally Posted by kirjmaru View Post
    Hi everyone
    I have a essay about "A holiday I remember". I wrote something about that. Can you check for me?
    " Last year, I had an interesting trip to HCM city. This was the first time I go by plane, so I was a little bit of nervous. But when I was on plane, I feel excited. Everything was tiny when I look at from above. It took 2 hours to fly to Tan Son Nhat airport. After landing, I moved to hotel and went to see a friend who helped me exploring the city. We visited many famous places like: Independence palace, Duc Ba church, Sai Gon central post office. They're beautiful architecture, so we took may photos. We also ate street food. Street food was so cheap, fresh and delicious. We hung out at an outdoor where young people sat on ground and had fun together. This was nice trip, and I hope I'll come back the city someday."
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