Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    iamwkk is offline Junior Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Other
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    42
    Post Thanks / Like

    Smile Thank-you Message

    Hi Teacher,

    Below is a note to be written on a thank-you card. Which of them is better, or is there any other way to express this message in a more sincere way?

    VERSION 1
    Thank you for being part of the triumphant launch of the XXX programme. Please accept the enclosed souvenir to mark this momentous occasion.

    VERSION 2
    Thank you for attending the launching ceremony of the XXX programme. Please accept the enclosed souvenir to mark this momentous occasion.

    Thank you.

  2. #2
    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Philippines
    Join Date
    Nov 2002
    Posts
    42,749
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: Thank-you Message

    I prefer the second- the first seems a bit excessive.

Similar Threads

  1. put my message across & phrase my message
    By cassie in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 24-Nov-2005, 06:36
  2. message missing
    By Natalie27 in forum Comments & Suggestions
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 21-Oct-2004, 21:01
  3. IM = Individual Message?
    By NewHope in forum General Language Discussions
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 25-Aug-2004, 06:58

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •