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    Please correct it..!!

    However, I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India) on Perl, Linux platform, however I want to pursue my interest and for same I decided to join Maters in communication Technology.

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    Re: Please correct it..!!

    Quote Originally Posted by learner_india View Post
    However, I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India) on Perl, Linux platform, however I want to pursue my interest and for same I decided to join Maters in communication Technology.
    The "howevers" dont' appear to refer to anything, though the first could connect to a previous sentence.

    I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India) on Perl, Linux platform. I want to pursue my interest by joining Maters in Communication Technology.

    In my sentence, I am assuming that "Maters" is a company. Is it?

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    Re: Please correct it..!!

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    The "howevers" dont' appear to refer to anything, though the first could connect to a previous sentence.

    I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India) on Perl, Linux platform. I want to pursue my interest by joining Maters in Communication Technology.

    In my sentence, I am assuming that "Maters" is a company. Is it?
    sorry its not maters ,its masters in communication technology,


    can i write it this way ...

    Although I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India), I want to pursue my interest and for same I decided to join Masters in communication Technology.


    basically i just want to to say that i worked as a software engineer, but i am not much interested in software and i want to pursue my interest in communication and want to do masters in communication...
    what will be the best way to write it... thank u in advance.

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    Re: Please correct it..!!

    Quote Originally Posted by learner_india View Post
    sorry its not maters ,its masters in communication technology,


    can i write it this way ...

    Although I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India), I want to pursue my interest and for same I decided to join Masters in communication Technology.


    basically i just want to to say that i worked as a software engineer, but i am not much interested in software and i want to pursue my interest in communication and want to do masters in communication...
    what will be the best way to write it... thank u in advance.
    Again, the "although" seems to be unnecessary.

    I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India) on Perl, Linux platform. I want to pursue my interest in Communication Technology by enrolling in a Master's program.

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    Re: Please correct it..!!

    Quote Originally Posted by learner_india View Post
    sorry its not maters ,its masters in communication technology,


    can i write it this way ...

    Although I have worked as a software engineer at IBM Global private limited(India), I want to pursue my interest and for same I decided to join Masters in communication Technology.


    basically i just want to to say that i worked as a software engineer, but i am not much interested in software and i want to pursue my interest in communication and want to do masters in communication...
    w
    hat will be the best way to write it... thank u in advance.
    Most of this post is incorrect because you have not used correct capitalisation or punctuation, and have used non-standard English. I have underlined every error. Please remember to write correctly at all times, not just when writing to external organisations.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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