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    Today i'd like to take a few moments to introduce myself and also i知 going to tell you a little bit about my background. First of all, my name痴 Darwin.and i was born and raised in Malaysia. But I moved to US because i知 working in New York and i知 staying there. Right now, I am employed as an assistant accountant in the private sector. The reason why I choose to spent my time to continue studying at nothern univercity because of salary. In addition to that I would like to gain and acquire knowledge in some more learning. Before I came here to get a degree, I had just finished study at technology univercity Singapore in 2008. Now I知 in semester 8 from Bachelor Public Management field and maybe in 1 year i will finish my studies.

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    Quote Originally Posted by amat darwin View Post
    Today i'd like to take a few moments to introduce myself and also i’m going to tell you a little bit about my background. First of all, my name’s Darwin.and i was born and raised in Malaysia. But I moved to US because i’m working in New York and i’m staying there. Right now, I am employed as an assistant accountant in the private sector. The reason why I choose to spent my time to continue studying at nothern univercity because of salary. In addition to that I would like to gain and acquire knowledge in some more learning. Before I came here to get a degree, I had just finished study at technology univercity Singapore in 2008. Now I’m in semester 8 from Bachelor Public Management field and maybe in 1 year i will finish my studies.
    Welcome, Amat!

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    Default Re: correct my essay for speech...pleaseee...

    "Now I知 in semester 8 from Bachelor Public Management field and maybe in 1 year i will finish my studies."

    I find that the sentence I highlight is grammatically wrong. It should be" in a year's time, I will have finished my study" . Please use the future perfect simple to say that an action will be finished at a specific time in the future. In this case, it does.

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    anyone plz help me to correct my essay...

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    Quote Originally Posted by amat darwin View Post
    Today i'd like to take a few moments to introduce myself and also i知 going to tell you a little bit about my background. First of all, my name痴 Darwin.and i was born and raised in Malaysia. But I moved to US because i知 working in New York and i知 staying there. Right now, I am employed as an assistant accountant in the private sector. The reason why I choose to spent my time to continue studying at nothern univercity because of salary. In addition to that I would like to gain and acquire knowledge in some more learning. Before I came here to get a degree, I had just finished study at technology univercity Singapore in 2008. Now I知 in semester 8 from Bachelor Public Management field and maybe in 1 year i will finish my studies.
    Look at the underlined parts above and correct them. When you are done, repost this for more comments.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gillnetter View Post
    Look at the underlined parts above and correct them. When you are done, repost this for more comments.

    Thaks Gillnetter , im frm Malaysia, my english very bad, so i hope this forum can help me to make my english better..

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