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    please check my small letter

    I am going to write a letter to a bank manager of a certain bank. my letter is below. please check my letter and let me know if there is any wrong.
    Thanks.


    To the manager,
    Regarding a request letter of proof of balance
    Name: Um Chakma
    Account NO: 009723567788

    Dear Sir,
    I have been dealing with commercial bank for years and I believe in your bank strongly. I am going to travel abroad in the next month. In order for a part of visa processes, I have been asked to proof my account balance. Hence I request for a letter showing my account balance.
    Thanks you


    Sincerely yours,

    Um Chakma

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    Re: please check my small letter

    Quote Originally Posted by UM Chakma View Post
    I am going to write a letter to a bank manager of a certain bank. My letter is below. Please check my letter and let me know if there is anything wrong.
    Thanks.


    To: The Manager

    Name: Um Chakma
    Account NO: 009723567788

    Dear Sir,

    Regarding a Request for a letter of proof of balance

    I have been dealing with commercial bank for years and I believe in your bank strongly.

    I am going planning to travel abroad in the next month. In order for a As part of the visa application processes, I have been asked to proof provide evidence of my account balance. Hence I would be very grateful if you would send me request for a letter showing my account balance.

    Thanks you


    Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully

    Um Chakma
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