I am going to write a letter to a bank manager of a certain bank. my letter is below. please check my letter and let me know if there is any wrong.
To the manager,
Regarding a request letter of proof of balance
Name: Um Chakma
Account NO: 009723567788
I have been dealing with commercial bank for years and I believe in your bank strongly. I am going to travel abroad in the next month. In order for a part of visa processes, I have been asked to proof my account balance. Hence I request for a letter showing my account balance.
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