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Naeem Afzal

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Hi teachers,

I have translated an Urdu paragraph which appeared on the exam paper. Please correct it.

"Knowledge is a great power. We not only gain material wealth but also spiritual peace through knowledge. It is every person's duty to gain knowledge in our religion. It is something that nobody can steal. Nobody can recognise himself without knowledge and hence, he remains unaware of his life purpose throughout his life. By gaining knowledge, man can cause betterment for himself, his society and nation.
 

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"Knowledge is a great power. We do not only gain material wealth but also spiritual peace through knowledge. It is every person's duty to gain knowledge in our religion. It is something that nobody can steal. Nobody can recognise himself without knowledge and hence, he remains unaware of his life purpose throughout his life. By gaining knowledge, man can cause betterment for himself, his society and nation.
 

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"Knowledge is a great power. We not only gain material wealth but also spiritual peace through knowledge. It is every person's duty to gain knowledge in our religion. It is something that nobody can steal. Nobody can recognise himself without knowledge and hence he remains unaware of his life purpose throughout his life. By gaining knowledge, man can cause betterment for himself, his society and nation.

I have just deleted the comma after 'hence', Naeem. Shibli.aftab was wrong to insert the word 'do' where he did.

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