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    #1

    a train carrying gold

    Are these sentences correct:
    1-They robbed a train last week carrying gold.
    2-They robbed a train last week that was carrying gold.

    The noun phrase is broken, but the meaning is clear. I think people say things like this but it seems to me that they do not work in formal English.

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    Re: a train carrying gold

    Quote Originally Posted by navi tasan View Post
    Are these sentences correct:
    1-They robbed a train last week carrying gold.
    2-They robbed a train last week that was carrying gold.

    The noun phrase is broken, but the meaning is clear. I think people say things like this but it seems to me that they do not work in formal English.

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    Navi.
    They are OK, but as you suggested, they could be better.

    Last week, they robbed a train that was carrying gold.

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    Re: a train carrying gold

    Quote Originally Posted by navi tasan View Post
    Are these sentences correct:
    1-They robbed a train last week carrying gold.
    2-They robbed a train last week that was carrying gold.

    The noun phrase is broken, but the meaning is clear. I think people say things like this but it seems to me that they do not work in formal English.

    Gratefully,
    Navi.
    The first sounds like the people who robbed the train were already carrying gold when they robbed it.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: a train carrying gold

    And remember you can also use the passive (unless the context had previously mentioned who "they" are):
    Last week, a train carrying gold was robbed
    A train carrying gold was robbed last week.
    Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.

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