Could you check this sentence and tell me if it makes sense?

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leszkoss

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Here it goes:


Labels/stereotypes, even tough they may pertain to a certain group of people and describe the characteristics of many of the people in that group, are inaccurate in a way that some people from that group may not possess or possess contrary traits indicated by the stereotype.


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konungursvia

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It makes sense but is grammatically incorrect.

You must say "... are inaccurate in that some people from that group may or may not possess....
 
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