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    Cristina.W is offline Newbie
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    Wink Message to a social network

    I have recently thought of sending a feedback message to a social network, and I wish you would tell me if I made any errors:
    "It would be better if people's comments did not disappear when they deactivate their account. That way, the abscence of certain comments would not be so confusing and inesthetic. So I suggest although someone's account could not be accessed, the comments they have left before deactivation should still be seen."
    Did I miss any comma?
    Is it too stilted? :D
    Thank you.
    Time stays long enough for anyone who will use it.
    - Leonardo da Vinci

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Re: Message to a social network

    Quote Originally Posted by Cristina.W View Post
    I have recently thought of sending a feedback message to a social network, and I wish you would tell me if I made any errors:
    "It would be better if people's comments did not disappear when they deactivate their account. That way, the absence of certain comments would not be so confusing and inesthetic (?). So I suggest although that while someone's account could might not be accessed accessible , the comments they have left before deactivation should still be seen available."
    Did I miss any comma?
    Is it too stilted? :D
    Thank you.
    Suggestions.

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