Hi Manager Name,
I need leave on 9th ,10th , 13th , 16th September . The reason is that I need to go out of station with my family from 13th to 16th September and I have some important work at home on 9th and 10th September.
So please grant me the same.
Thanks & Regards,
Help me in writing this mail correctly..
Dear [Manager's Name]
I would like to take leave on the following dates:
a. 9 - 10 September inclusive. I have some important work to do at home.
b. 13 - 16 September inclusive. I need to go out of station with my family.
Please let me know as soon as possible if that is acceptable.
This is quite a formal format, but it makes it absolutely clear which dates you want as leave, and why.
I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....