Re: Formal email to manager
Welcome to the forum.
Originally Posted by anoopav
Firstly, please don't add your questions to someone else's thread. If you want to ask a new question, press the "Post New Thread" button and start a new thread.
Please see my amendments to your post above. I suggest you also add to your letter exactly how much oil you need to order but I don't know how your company's system works.
It is important to follow the rules of written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
- End every sentence with a single appropriate punctuation mark.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.