LittleOptimistic
New member
- Joined
- Aug 31, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- United States
- Current Location
- Saudi Arabia
Can someone please check this short description. I'm preparing for IGCSE English.
The soft sand glistened as it joyfully reflected the sun's ray. the subtle sea sparkled as it casually strolled up against the shore, leaving the rocks and sea-shells glinting. Crystal-clear water stretched far into the horizon getting darker and deeper, however maintaining serenity effortlessly. As I breathed in fresh air, the smell of salty sea tingled my nose. The cold and refreshing breeze gently eased up against my skin and glided through my hair. the rustling of the swaying palm tree leaves, birds twittering as they soared high above and the delicate splashes of the sea were amazingly soothing. The waves singing me a dulcet lullaby made me reminisce my childhood and drew me closer to them.
Thank you
The soft sand glistened as it joyfully reflected the sun's ray. the subtle sea sparkled as it casually strolled up against the shore, leaving the rocks and sea-shells glinting. Crystal-clear water stretched far into the horizon getting darker and deeper, however maintaining serenity effortlessly. As I breathed in fresh air, the smell of salty sea tingled my nose. The cold and refreshing breeze gently eased up against my skin and glided through my hair. the rustling of the swaying palm tree leaves, birds twittering as they soared high above and the delicate splashes of the sea were amazingly soothing. The waves singing me a dulcet lullaby made me reminisce my childhood and drew me closer to them.
Thank you
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