HI , English teachers
Actually, I want to know your opinion in this Paragraph ?
and If I have mistakes and what about unity
Convenience foods are easy to prepare. Preparations of foods don't need much effort to cook. It is just need to heat it, and takes a few minutes to be ready for eating. Once time, my exam was about to start and I will be late and I hadn't had a breakfast, moreover, I opened canned bean and heated it, and had breakfast. Also, convenience foods aren't taken much time to eat, in less than five minutes. Besides, easy storage helps prepare foods to be easy and fast.
thank you for reading and your comments
Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Sep-2013 at 00:05. Reason: Tidying up formatting
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
thank you very much.
I can see new amendments.
No, really, I want to improve my writing skills, so I have decided to write more.
Start sentences with capitals. End sentences with a period, exclamation point, or question mark.
Thank you very much. I can see the new changes.
thank you Mr Charlie Bernstein.