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    panasonic100 is offline Newbie
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    Default need help with sentence

    Hi,
    Could you please help me with these sentences. Which one sounds better?

    -This killing will be carried out by the military using bombs.
    -The military will carry out this murdering using bombs.

    Very grateful for any help

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: need help with sentence

    It depends on who is saying this- killing/murdering are both very loaded terms- the military would not use them.

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    I agree. It would be something like this:
    "The military will target the objective with explosive ordnance."

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