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panasonic100

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Hi,
Could you please help me with these sentences. Which one sounds better?

-This killing will be carried out by the military using bombs.
-The military will carry out this murdering using bombs.

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Tdol

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It depends on who is saying this- killing/murdering are both very loaded terms- the military would not use them.
 

SlickVic9000

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I agree. It would be something like this:
"The military will target the objective with explosive ordnance."
 
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