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    Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Hi,

    Tourism can have both a positive and a negative effects on an area. In rural areas, the onset of tourism may have dramatic consequences upon the local conditions, creating new jobs and providing a flow of cash which most inhabitants will be happy to take advantage of. However, the disadvantages of tourism can be equally dramatic, with towns losing their character and becoming overdeveloped and crowded, as well as more expensive.

    Are the words I used in that paragraph right?

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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Quote Originally Posted by ucef View Post
    Hi,

    Tourism can have both a positive and a negative effects on an area. In rural areas, the onset of tourism may have dramatic consequences upon the local conditions, creating new jobs and providing a flow of cash which most inhabitants will be happy to take advantage of. However, the disadvantages of tourism can be equally dramatic, with towns losing their character and becoming overdeveloped and crowded, as well as more expensive.

    Are the words I used in that paragraph right?

    Thank you.
    The first two are not correct.

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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    The first two are not correct.
    The first two words must begin respectively with the letters e and c.
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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Quote Originally Posted by ucef View Post
    The first two words must begin respectively with the letters e and c.
    Yes, but "effects" and "conditions" are not correct.
    Last edited by bhaisahab; 08-Sep-2013 at 21:18.

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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    Yes, but "effects" and not "conditions" are notcorrect.
    Sorry that "s" must be omitted, I did not have the intention to write it. Concerning the second word I think I need a synonym of "affairs".
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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    I think it to be "concern".
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    Re: Effects / Conditions / Which / Disadvantages

    Quote Originally Posted by ucef View Post
    I think it to be "concern".
    No, it's not that, "community" fits rather well though.

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