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    dear sir, I need to inform you our branch oil tank is only 400 ltrs oil. need to order oil. kindly do needful.

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    Re: Formal email to manager

    Quote Originally Posted by anoopav View Post
    Dear Sir,

    I need to inform you that our branch oil tank is contains only 400 ltrs of oil. I need to order more oil. Kindly do needful take the necessary steps.
    Welcome to the forum.

    Firstly, please don't add your questions to someone else's thread. If you want to ask a new question, press the "Post New Thread" button and start a new thread.

    Please see my amendments to your post above. I suggest you also add to your letter exactly how much oil you need to order but I don't know how your company's system works.

    It is important to follow the rules of written English:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - End every sentence with a single appropriate punctuation mark.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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