[Grammar] Same time I prepared same drink and served

[susitha]

Same time I prepared same drink and served and he was happy with that and I show empty glasses. We haven’t charge that to guests.

 

[bhaisahab]

Same time I prepared same drink and served and he was happy with that and I show empty glasses. We haven’t charge that to guests.

What is your question, susitha?

 

[susitha]

Rover, need to check my grammar mistake.

 

[emsr2d2]

Rover, I need someone to check my piece for grammar mistakes.

My first suggestion is that you look at your tenses. You start with "I prepared", "served" and "was" but you go on to use "show" and "haven't charge". Check all the words and the tense agreements carefully and try again.