lolitta9222
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- Joined
- Sep 18, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- French
- Home Country
- France
- Current Location
- United States
i created a blog to help me improve my English. Can you please edit my post. i appreciate that. Thanks in advance
I was laying on the grass when this cute little boy came to me. I asked him if he was lost. He asked me if I have games on my phone. I told him that I don’t have any. He gave me a sad look. I felt bad so I gave him my phone to play games. He looked at me again and asked me why i don’t smile. I told him that I m very stressed about so many things in my life. He got closer to me and he told that the games in my phone are boring. He asked again if I have any good songs. I said yes. i played a song and he started dancing. I started laughing. He kept dancing and couldn't stop laughing. I n one second, I sow in him the beauty and the innocent that we lose as we grow u. Eve though he was as dancing like a fool, he didn’t care a bout what I would think. He layed again next to me, and we start talking for a while. His energy and his cute attitude made me feel positive. He made my day!
I was laying on the grass when this cute little boy came to me. I asked him if he was lost. He asked me if I have games on my phone. I told him that I don’t have any. He gave me a sad look. I felt bad so I gave him my phone to play games. He looked at me again and asked me why i don’t smile. I told him that I m very stressed about so many things in my life. He got closer to me and he told that the games in my phone are boring. He asked again if I have any good songs. I said yes. i played a song and he started dancing. I started laughing. He kept dancing and couldn't stop laughing. I n one second, I sow in him the beauty and the innocent that we lose as we grow u. Eve though he was as dancing like a fool, he didn’t care a bout what I would think. He layed again next to me, and we start talking for a while. His energy and his cute attitude made me feel positive. He made my day!