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    Hello.
    I make some sentences, so can you correct it for me please?


    Fast food is bad food for health students.

    Many thanks to you
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    I realise it has been a couple of days since you posted this, but bumping a post isn't really necessary. The Editing and Writing Topics section doesn't get as much attention as some other parts of the forum.

    What was the purpose of your exercise?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    I realise it has been a couple of days since you posted this, but bumping a post isn't really necessary. The Editing and Writing Topics section doesn't get as much attention as some other parts of the forum.

    What was the purpose of your exercise?
    I wanted to know that structure of the sentences was correct or wrong.

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    Re: Can you correct my sentences please?

    When will you submit your homework assignment to your teacher?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: Can you correct my sentences please?

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    When will you submit your homework assignment to your teacher?
    I submited it to my teacher, but I want to know that structure of the sentences was correct or wrong.

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    Re: Can you correct my sentences please?

    Quote Originally Posted by Laza18 View Post
    I submitted it to my teacher (no comma required) but I want to know that if the structure of the sentences was correct or wrong.
    When your teacher gives your piece back to you, you will find out whether it was right or wrong. If you cannot understand your teacher's comments or corrections, come back and ask us for an explanation.
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