Re: Please proof read my article with respect to grammar and writing skill
I'm afraid there are multiple mistakes in your piece.
Originally Posted by shibli.aftab
For a start, you have used a comma each time you should have used an apostrophe. Look at the difference between "won,t" (which you wrote) and "won't" (which is correct). Click the Edit Post button and put apostrophes in the right places.
Your second sentence ("Why won't I have great respect ...") does not make any sense. Can you try to explain what you want to say in a different way.
There are other errors but let's deal with those two aspects first.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.