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    Default He cheat me in the game

    It is unfair.he cheat me in the game.

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    Default re: He cheat me in the game

    Quote Originally Posted by sumayyarizwan View Post
    It is unfair.he cheat me in the game.
    Sorry about that.

    It was unfair. He cheated in the game.

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    Default Re: correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by sumayyarizwan View Post
    It is unfair.he had cheated me in the game.
    PLEASE give your threads better titles. "He had cheated me" for example.

    1. You need a space after you punctuation mark.
    2. You need a capital letter to start your second sentence.
    3. Use simple past, not past perfect.
    4. Consider deleting "me in the game."
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Default Re: correct my sentence

    I have merged your two identical threads. Post a question ONE TIME only.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Default Re: correct my sentence

    I have changed the title of this thread and of all your other threads. Any posts you make after 3.30pm UK time today without a relevant title risk being deleted.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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