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    Default Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

    Hello users!

    1. The preparatory work aimed at dismounting the fan was performed.
    2. The preparatory work was done, with the goal/object(ive)/aim/intention of dismounting the fan.Which is better?

    I think they mean exactly the same
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    Thank you.

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    Default Re: Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

    Quote Originally Posted by JACEK1 View Post
    Hello users!

    1. The preparatory work aimed at dismounting the fan was performed.
    2. The preparatory work was done, with the goal/object(ive)/aim/intention of dismounting the fan.Which is better?

    I think they mean exactly the same
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    Thank you.
    Both sentences have the same meaning, but I don't like either of them. How about something simpler? "The preparatory work for dismounting the fan was performed."

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    Default Re: Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

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    A better title would have been
    The preparatory work.



    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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    Default Re: Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

    Yes, You are right, Rover_KE, but I was afraid there would be too little space for the title in the header.

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    Default Re: Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

    Quote Originally Posted by JACEK1 View Post
    Yes, You are right, Rover_KE, but I was afraid there would be too little space for the title in the header.
    You don't need to put the while sentence in a title. Just calling it "The preparatory work" would have been fine. It's just so that we can easily differentiate between threads.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Default Re: Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

    I will try to do it in future.

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