Dear Santonica,according to these scores any recommendations to improve the writing ???
When it comes to writing better, I like to follow Larry King's advice: "Write. Rewrite. When not writing or rewriting, read."
You can write on this forum, and I'm sure you will get feedback.
You've already received some, and I would be happy to help too!
I also use these other two places to write regularly: Medium (https://medium.com/) and DailyThem.es (http://www.dailythem.es).
I personally prefer the latter because there's often good peer feedback.
For reading, I suggest the New York Times (The New York Times - Breaking News, World News & Multimedia) and the Economist (The Economist - World News, Politics, Economics, Business & Finance).
I find the New York times a lighter read.