Re: have a problem in academic IELTS writing
I think that good, clear writing is 70% good, clear thinking and 20% grammar/syntax and 10% good style.
I think someone writing in a second language will have the hardest time with the style. You still have some work to do on the other 90%. Why don't you write your response to that prompt again, but in good, clear sentences following a good, clear plan?
Last edited by emsr2d2; 21-Oct-2013 at 23:36.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.