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    Default Self made paragraph

    Hi,

    I poured water from faucet into kettle. I put fresh ginger in the water. then I put the kettle on the fire , I turned on the fire, after a few minutes the water boiled . then I poured the water to a big bowl. I put brown sugar in the water. now I am drinking hot water with brown sugar , ginger .

    Would you please be nice enough to correct my errors?

    Thank you

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    Default Re: Self made paragraph

    For a start, I'm sure you know we don't put a space before a comma or a full stop, and that a new sentence (after a full stop) starts with a capital letter.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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