Re: Can you please help me revise my paper
Fish-able, I don't know if your comment was aimed at mglad but if so, it was rather rude. There is an issue on the forum with spacing when one cuts/copies and pastes text from somewhere else. When the post is submitted, the spaces between some of the words vanish. It is not the writer's fault and generally, people come to realise the issue occurs and they go back later and edit their post. I have edited post #2 to put the spaces back in.
Please also remember that a single, appropriate punctuation mark at the end of any sentence suffices. You need to choose between the question mark and the exclamation mark in post #11. Given the construction of the sentence, only one of them is appropriate of course.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.