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    • Join Date: Oct 2013
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    Post Enquiry on employment vacancies: Please make correction on my Covering latter for job

    Dear Club Manager:

    With the enclosed resume, I am formally indicating my interest in the Golf Outside Operation (Bagdrop, Ranger, Starter, Proshop) Assistant Golf Coach & Sports Co-ordinator/ Office & Competition Administrator position at Clontarf Golf Club
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    In my current job as the Superintendent Golf & Tournament at The Karachi Golf Club in Karachi, Pakistan. I have improved every aspect of the golf program at this esteemed golf club. Although I am quite happy in my current situation and am appreciated for the significant improvements I have made in every area of the golf program, it has always been my goal to get associated one day with a prestigious club such as The Clontarf Golf Club. I am aware of the high-profile clientele you serve, and I feel certain I could add value to your operation and enhance the superior climate for which you already are known. At Karachi Golf Club, I have resourcefully found new ways to save money every year while making sure customers are satisfied with all “the little things” that can drive members crazy if they’re not perfect! By those “little things” I include things such as the variety and quality of golf shop inventory, the tournament program, golf instruction, golf cart operation and bag storage, driving range administration, as well as the operation of starters and rangers.

    I have taken golf instruction to a new level and, while supervising the employees, I have continually developed the instructional abilities of my assistants. I have completed PGF (Pakistan Golf Federation) Golf Teaching School I and II, have served with PGF and was invited by PGF officials to act as Scorer/Draws for the Pakistan Open Tournaments.In my present job, I gained extensive experience in organizing and managing an extensive tournament schedule including The CISM World Military Golf Championship, Asian Tour, Faldo Series Pakistan and Audi Quattro Cup of Pakistan.

    You would find me a person to be a congenial individual who prides me on own ability to relate well to anyone. I believe strongly in the ability of golf to teach and refine virtues including honesty, fairness, courtesy, responsibility, and discipline.I hope you will write or call me and suggest a time when we might meet in confidence to discuss your needs. I can provide valuable/outstanding references.

    Sincerely yours,

    Anjum Masoud

    Last edited by emsr2d2; 20-Oct-2013 at 14:10. Reason: Changed strange sized and coloured words

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