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    Default Help me with my letter please.

    Hello!

    My name is Krisse. I am an Administrative Assistant and in-charge of everything related to paperwork. My boss told to write a letter for different big companies asking for the name of their Marketing Manager and his/her contact details so we know who to address our business proposals to. I am really having a hard time writing this letter because I honestly have no idea how to do it and I'm afraid my boss and the companies who would read my letter will laugh at it.


    Please please help me.


    Thanks,
    Krisse

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    Default Re: Help me with my letter please.

    swardle6691, I have deleted the contents of your post. It was incorrect and unhelpful and you did not start your post by saying that you are not a teacher. Before you try to help other learners, it is important that you improve your own English.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Default Re: Help me with my letter please.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    I would use Madam not Madame.
    Go! You can use Madam.
    Last edited by 5jj; 20-Nov-2013 at 12:34. Reason: another unhelpful post delelted

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    Default Re: Help me with my letter please.

    Quote Originally Posted by krisse.canimo View Post
    Hello!

    My name is Krisse. I am an Administrative Assistant and in-charge of everything related to paperwork. My boss told to write a letter for different big companies asking for the name of their Marketing Manager and his/her contact details so we know who to address our business proposals to. I am really having a hard time writing this letter because I honestly have no idea how to do it and I'm afraid my boss and the companies who would read my letter will laugh at it.


    Please please help me.


    Thanks,
    Krisse
    Welcome to the forum, krisse.

    I am afraid Your thread got sidetracked by nuisances.

    We don't write letters for people, but one of our members may correct yours if you post it here.

    Keep it simple. Introduce yourself, say just what you want to say, and then stop.

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