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Prik Siripitch

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What did you do during October holiday
On my holiday, I spent the most of time to stayed at my home . When I stayed at my home I usually waked up at 9 o'clock .Everyone thinks that 9 o'clock is too late, but I think it's good to my health because during the semester I always get up very early to go to school and sometimes I stay up late to review my lesson.Getting plenty of rest made my brain feel fresh all time.
The activity that I did during my vacation is reading a book half of day and play computer game with remained time . When I was played computer I played Superstar Karaoke with my sister.Even though I can't sing well but I want to sing because the sound of music make me relax.
The last thing I did is meeting with my old friend I was very happy when we talk about our life in new school. I can't wait to my next vacation.


 

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What did you do during October holiday
On my holiday, I spent the most of time to stayed at my home . When I stayed at my home I usually waked up at 9 o'clock .Everyone thinks that 9 o'clock is too late, but I think it's good to my health because during the semester I always get up very early to go to school and sometimes I stay up late to review my lesson.Getting plenty of rest made my brain feel fresh all time.
The activity that I did during my vacation is reading a book half of day and play computer game with remained time . When I was played computer I played Superstar Karaoke with my sister.Even though I can't sing well but I want to sing because the sound of music make me relax.
The last thing I did is meeting with my old friend I was very happy when we talk about our life in new school. I can't wait to my next vacation.



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