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    How to reframe this sentence better...

    Many of the wonderful moments we often share, certainly have a connection with any of the trips we conduct and hence the excitement they inflame in us causes us to change our notion towards all aspects of life related to nature.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Niyabanna View Post
    How to reframe this sentence better...

    Many of the wonderful moments we often share, certainly have a connection with any of the trips we conduct and hence the excitement they inflame in us causes us to change our notion towards all aspects of life related to nature.
    Try breaking up the sentence into 2 pieces. That will help a lot.

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    Or... When we travel, we often see beautiful things that make us feel even closer to nature.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    Or... When we travel, we often see beautiful things that make us feel even closer to nature.
    An even better idea!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Niyabanna View Post
    How to reframe this sentence better...
    "How can I reframe this sentence better?"

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    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    Try breaking up the sentence into 2 pieces. That will help a lot.
    Thank you Mike...

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    Thank you, Barb_D

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    Please don't write new posts to say "Thank you". Simply click on the Like button on any post you found helpful. It can be very time-consuming for us to open a thread thinking that there are new questions or new responses, only to find that it's simply a thank you (or in your case, two of them).
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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