I am translating a speech for a scholastic event, but there are way of saying in English which are really difficult to me yet. Please, can you have a look of what I have written? Does it sound good to your English ears?
Thank you for your valuable help!
But on the condition that we succeed in giving you a method, a system, a so free, so open to new achievement experience that would put you at ease.
Ma solo a condizione che noi riusciamo a dare a voi un metodo, un sistema, un’esperienza cosė libera, cosė aperta a nuove conquiste che vi metta assolutamente a vostro agio.
Last edited by ema111; 08-Nov-2013 at 16:44.