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    Exclamation help for composing mails

    Friends,

    Mostly I am sending mail to higher authority to provide some update as below, pls help me so that i can write it in good language,

    1. Some work has been done like , configuration of router has done properly .
    2. I have checked some devices and found some problem.
    3. docket i have raised is approved today and you can implement the changes now.


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    Sumit

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    Re: help for composing mails

    waiting for reply....

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    Re: help for composing mails

    Quote Originally Posted by sumitbasak View Post
    Friends, Unnecessary

    Mostly I am mostly/mainly sending send emails to higher authority people at a higher grade/senior officers to provide some updates as shown below. pls Please help me so that i can to write it well. in good language,

    1. Some work has been done - like for example, the configuration of the router has been done properly.
    2. I have checked some devices and found some problems.
    3. The docket I have raised is was/has been approved today and you can implement the changes now.


    Regards,
    Sumit
    See above.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: help for composing mails

    thanks for your rectification. Mostly I write "Docket is approved. Please implement the changes". Is that ok ?

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    Re: help for composing mails

    Hi Team,

    Delivery date is showing 29th Oct 2013 and as per your mail it has been received on 7th Nov 2013. All the original diagnosis reports and prescription original copies are required for further treatment. So return the same processing and settlement .

    Please check if this mail is ok...

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