all happen around- word order and verb agreement problems
It 's- style
reside in dome- wrong word
take in paper- article
they enjoy learning the events- capitalisation and missing preposition
newspaper is- article or make it plural
butthe way we get to know the colorful workd is more than that- Rewrite this- there are othe wyas we...
video clip- just one?
the vivid way- I don't like 'vivid'