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    Default IELT'S essay . please help me with correcting this introduction.

    What is certain is that children must watch TV programs which are appropriate for their age (for them) and parents, in a first place should impose restrictions to protect their children to access to such contents(programs) on TV or Internet. However, there are some arguments that think that government and authorities should take the responsibility of such a matter and take effective measures.
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