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    Email Grammer - please check

    I want to send an email to BBC - please check my grammer and look professional.

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    Hello,

    Iím the web leader of 'Majid Ahmedís Official Fans Site' at www.whatever.com

    I would to know if I am allowed to add some video clips of Majid Ahmedís events and Majid Ahmedís News to appear on 'Majid Ahmedís Official Fans Site'. I have recorded some video clips of Majid Ahmed from BBC channels. It would be grateful if you allowed me to do this and I would add a BBC link and the logo of BBC on the Fans Site so the users would know that the video clips are copyright by BBC.

    Regards,
    Tom
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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: Email Grammer - please check

    It would be- I would be grateful
    copyright by BBC- BBC copyright

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    Re: Email Grammer - please check

    Thanks.. but is that it?

    I thought my grammer is bad and not looking professional?

    Cheers

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