wasaloga
New member
- Joined
- Dec 11, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Thai
- Home Country
- Thailand
- Current Location
- Thailand
::: I practice my writing skill by myself and this is my first task. Please help me check the grammar, spelling and revising my writing. :::
I'd be grateful if you help me
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When I was 15 years old, I had three very lovely kittens in my house; they were like my only friends. I always spent my free time to look after them attentively. Since they was born until they were 4 months, there was not a day that went by that I didn’t saw their faces or heard their voices, and I loved them so much. One day, I woke up from a nightmare in the middle of the night. My heart was beating as though it was going to explode and my body was full of sweat. In that Saturday’s morning, I had to go to study Chinese language with an impartial emotion. While I was on the way, the nightmare popped up on my mind again, and then followed by thinking of my kittens. I cannot concentrate on the class because I was unreasonably concerned about my kittens. When I came back home, everyone in my house was standing at the door and my mom said “View, your little kittens had dead already. It is an accident, while they were playing at the car’s wheels, Miss.Kaew came to her car and drove the car. When the car was moving, the kittens didn’t run away from those wheels because they didn’t know why their toys moved like that and still stayed at the top of the wheels. At last, they were dead by those wheels.” After she had finished speaking, I was crying immediately. Although many years have passed, I still always think of them, my kittens. And here is my worst day of my life; it’s the day I lost my three dear friends.
I'd be grateful if you help me
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When I was 15 years old, I had three very lovely kittens in my house; they were like my only friends. I always spent my free time to look after them attentively. Since they was born until they were 4 months, there was not a day that went by that I didn’t saw their faces or heard their voices, and I loved them so much. One day, I woke up from a nightmare in the middle of the night. My heart was beating as though it was going to explode and my body was full of sweat. In that Saturday’s morning, I had to go to study Chinese language with an impartial emotion. While I was on the way, the nightmare popped up on my mind again, and then followed by thinking of my kittens. I cannot concentrate on the class because I was unreasonably concerned about my kittens. When I came back home, everyone in my house was standing at the door and my mom said “View, your little kittens had dead already. It is an accident, while they were playing at the car’s wheels, Miss.Kaew came to her car and drove the car. When the car was moving, the kittens didn’t run away from those wheels because they didn’t know why their toys moved like that and still stayed at the top of the wheels. At last, they were dead by those wheels.” After she had finished speaking, I was crying immediately. Although many years have passed, I still always think of them, my kittens. And here is my worst day of my life; it’s the day I lost my three dear friends.