It seemed as if my smile was taken away. Today I tried to smile and I succeeded. Is it correct?
A Word A Day:
I don't know what you are trying to say. If today your smile came back, then it seems to me that the first part of the piece should be in the past perfect.
It had seemed as if my smile had been taken away. However, today I tried to smile and I succeeded.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.