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    Post Please correct the grammar in the following letter- Mobile Replacement Request

    Dear Sir,

    I have received mobile from our company and it was activated on 04.12.2013.
    The mobile got struck frequently and it is having other issues also.
    The back ground light is always illuminating contentiously, due to that reason the battery is not withstanding.
    We request you to kindly arrange to change the mobile with good one.

    Thanks and Regards,

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    Re: Please correct the grammar in the following letter- Mobile Replacement Request

    This is the 6th time you have posted this. Have you read any of the comments on your previous threads?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please correct the grammar in the following letter- Mobile Replacement Request

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    This is the 6th time you have posted this. Have you read any of the comments on your previous threads?
    Apparently not. I shall simply delete any more similar postings.

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