Re: formal email,is it correct ?
I don't think that someone applying for a university course can be said to have a vested interest in that university. 'Esteemed' seems a little over the top, and we don't in modern BrE normally 'respectfully' ask someone to provide information. The last two sentences do not appear natural at all. I would suggest:
Originally Posted by rw6236
I am extremely interested in the MB/BS coure offered by X. I would like to apply for a place on this course in 2014, but need some additional information. Could you please let me know:
1. Does Nepal's HSEB (Higher Secondary Examination Board) Certicicate satisfy your entry requirement?
2. If my application is successful, will I be classed as an international or SAARC student as regards fees?
3. Do you require any specific qualifications for entry?
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