Dear teacher,

I am about to read this book to a group of kids. I would love to have some help to check if there is any error in my pronunciation. I don't want to ruin it for those kids. Besides, my reading doesn't sound native to my own ears, but I cannot put my finger on what exactly I did wrong. Could you give my some advice?

Here is the recording:
https://soundcloud.com/harriet_yang/pronunciation-check

Thanks
Harriet