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    Default Re: help me in writing a letter

    Please tell your mother I wish her a very happy birthday.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Default Re: help me in writing a letter

    Your girlfriend isn't going to care about grammar.

    The "you are mine" part is a little creepy.

    She's most likely going to say something like "Raj sends his best wishes for a really great birthday" so you probably don't need to put that much thought into it.
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    Default Re: help me in writing a letter

    I am writing what follows as a general note rather than a direct response to rajbir's question.

    People from some parts of the world, both speakers of other languages and native speakers of their variety of English, often use a rather more 'flowery' language than most native speakers of English from the UK, North America, Australia and New Zealand. Barb's suggestion in post #2 is all that most of us would say, even to somebody we actually knew. This does not suggest lack of respect. It's simply that we find effusive expression rather embarrassing.
    Please do not edit your question after it has received a response. Such editing can make the response hard for others to understand.


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    Default Re: help me in writing a letter

    Quote Originally Posted by rajblr View Post
    I have sent the email and removed the mine part as per your advice...I didn't put much thought I just wanted to make sure its not a formal mail... As I really felt from heart to wish her.. I have never wished any friends mother other than my own mother... So thought how to express it.. I m weak in vocabulary..
    Anyway thanks a ton... I appreciate your help
    Please remember that we do not join sentences with endless examples of ... as you have done above. One full stop is enough.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Default Re: help me in writing a letter

    Quote Originally Posted by rw6236 View Post
    "Creepy?"
    Totally creepy.
    We are not owned.
    Someone who thinks I am "his" would creep me out.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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