I am new here. I have not learned English academically or
scholasticat school but am a self-educated person thatwho havehas exercisedpractised/done exercises in some forums. So I confess I am not an English expert Englishand need some considerationshelp and guidesguidance. in this way.Also, I have many questions and need anongoing editing aboutof my texts thatwhich I will askpost here. For startingTo start with, this is a comment I sent to a forum today and am curious to know what aremy wrongserrors are.
It happened for me a few years ago too.This happened to me a few years ago.
I had a 125cc Honda motorcycle.
There is a
vast(you say it is vast at the beginning of the next paragraph so it doesn't need to be said here) dry salt lake near my city (usually the most of it, is empty of waterit is mostly empty in the summer).
veryvast and flattenedflat so it is perfect for driving. and
to driveriding my motorcycle inon such smoothysmooth ground.
wasis covered with 10cm salt and wasis very pleasant for a soft drivingdrive/ride.
SomedayOne day, I went there and played for hours on the flat salts.
Beside the lake was a natural water channel.
for water passage.
I decided to jump over the channel
aslike moto SportMotoSport riders! !
But sorrilyUnfortunately I fell into the channel instead of jumping over it.
The half of me and motorcycleI sank up to my waist/to the top of my thighs into a deep and very sticky mud which was covered with a tinythin layer of salt andwhich I didn't notice. that.
attemptedtried very hard for a long time to release my legs from that sticky mud and eventually I could to get outextricated myself from the mud aslike an iguana.
Then I looked at
themy motorcycle - which thehalf of thatit was in the mud. into
there or near to that placearound to help me topull out themy motorcycle.
So I began trolling the rear wheel low-low. I don't know what this means. "Trolling" is not the right verb here. Do you mean that you started to spin the back wheel very slowly.
the half-hourhalf an hour I succeededmanaged to take outrescue my motorcycle from the mass of glue!
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