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    Dear teachers would you please correct this piece of letter?
    "During my studing for PhD degree I would like to pay attention to the wide point of view of clinical work(or research?) in neurovascular surgery and
    microsurgical aspects of exra-intracranial bypass surgery.
    I would be honored to study other aspects of neurovascular surgery from your great experience."
    Thank you in advance.

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    "During PhD degree I would like to focus on a broad perspecetive of clinical work(or research?- I really don't know whether it's clinical work or research, I'm afraid- how about clinical research?) in neurovascular...

    I would be honored to study other aspects of neurovascular surgery from your great experience.
    This sounds odd to me- are you just trying to be polite, or do you want him or her to suggest things to study?

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    Dear tdol,thankyou for your reply.
    Yes, i wrote that sentence jast for being polite,but i'll quit it.
    I have one more question.How do you say in english studing after PhD degree?
    Thanks a lot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tatu
    Dear tdol,thankyou for your reply.
    Yes, i wrote that sentence jast for being polite,but i'll quit it.
    I have one more question.How do you say in english studing after PhD degree?
    Thanks a lot.
    Studing? is'nt it studying?
    pls correct me if I were wrong.tnx

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    Default Re: please correct this piece of letter

    yES,YOU'RE RIGHT,BUT CAN YOU ANSWER TO MY QUESTION???

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    Default Re: please correct this piece of letter

    post-PhD, post-doctorate or doctoral, depending on whetehr you want a noun or an adjective.

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